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Re: Little Isle of the Damned
by MystryssRavynDarque (amanda-at-vibechild-dot-com)
on Jun 21, 2005 - 12:18 PM
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I think this could be used as a first chapter after some cleaning up. Then it could lead into the history of the characters and their relationships etc, then into how they ended up there and perhaps a rescue for the two of them or something like that. If the author wants them to be rescued.
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Re: Little Isle of the Damned
by dead-cell (freaksworth01@netscape.net)
on Jun 21, 2005 - 09:46 PM
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First, let me thank you for the kind and constructive comments from the both of you. Secondly, I originally intended to write a short less than a page story with no reason or purpose behind it. Just some characters tortured for nothing. I wanted leave with a lingering image of the two lovers trapped between a rock and a hard place suffering possibly for an eternity. As for the chapter idea, I’m going to say no. Mainly because I got the idea from a Japanese legend (or urban legend), also I read that there is a manga premised around it.
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