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Re: Footsteps
by Schizo (Aranea@Spidersdance.com)
on Oct 21, 2004 - 02:20 AM
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Exactly, Merry. I'm a bit surprised that our honorable editors let the typos go. But when it came down to it, the main problem was that the author never let us into the story; we were merely told ABOUT the story. It read more like the outline sketch of what the story was going to be than the finished product itself.
But it's definitely someplace to start from. I'd sit on it a bit, mull it over, get inside your characters a bit more, sort of live it from the inside and see if you can make it come alive.
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