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Fiction: Toy Dolls 15 |
Posted by
Shade on Wednesday, August 20, 2003 - 04:55 AM PST
The door flew from the hinges, shouts could be heard from beyond the ruined portal, and as one entity, the group inside stood and backed up until we formed a human shield around Devon. It may not have been a cult, but we had our recognized leaders. I noticed Hades, Kali, and a few others were being quietly shifted through the ranks until they too stood beside Devon, and behind us. The figure that strode through the ruined portal was the same one who had taken Dream from me.
She was buxom, with her hair died an impossible shade of red, and at the moment that red matched her complexion which was flushed with rage. I felt Rose cringe and try to hide behind me. I reached out a hand and found hers. While the woman stood in the splinters and settling dust, I turned to Rose, it was impetuous I knew, but I felt, at the same time, that it was right; "Rose, be my slave, for the next year, pledge yourself to me." I reached across her and nudged Hades so we would have a witness. He turned and while I watched Rose's expression go from fear to joy, I repeated my request. "Pledge yourself to me, for a year." "Oh yes Master! Yes!" She glanced back at Hades. "I pledge to be your slave for the span of a year, to start immediately." Hades checked his watch and from nowhere he pulled a notepad and pen that he held poised as he looked at me. "I accept your service and your love Rose. For the period of a year, I will be your master." Hades nodded, scribbled something in his notebook and snapped it shut. I looked up behind him and saw Kali nodding to herself. There was a satisfied smile on her face. Then the intruder began to speak and we turned back to face her. "You make me sick, all your talk of equality and fair play and here you are, sequestered away calmly deciding who to keep and who to throw away as it suits you." Her face had gone from solid red to mottled gray. She was so far from beauty that she almost came out the other end, almost but not quite. Devon spoke from the back of the room, he spread his arms and a clear path opened between him and the woman. "You have it all wrong Ariana. The decision was made long ago, not by a secret cabal, as you seem to expect, but by yourselves. We speak of equality and you treat your slaves like chattel, we speak of fair play and you and you kind have conspired to control a free exchange of information and friendship. I know you will probably bring up tolerance next, you and your kind have shown no tolerance for the slightest infraction of a slave, nor have you shown patience for the beliefs that brought this club into existence. You have never shown respect to any single person, including your own self-righteous self. This intrusion on a private lunch between my friends and myself is intolerable, now get out. Get out of my club, get out of my house, get out and do not come back." His delivery was a calm as the eye of a storm.
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Re: Toy Dolls 15
by Merry_Widow on Aug 20, 2003 - 02:38 PM
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Cry havoc and let loose the dogs of war! Woo hoo! This story just gets more and more interesting, Shade. I can't wait to see where it's going next.
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Re: Toy Dolls 15
by Squire-of-Gothos (Brian0049@hotmail.com)
on Aug 20, 2003 - 10:10 PM
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I know we always shoot for originality here at Shmeng, and I hate cliches, but boy oh boy, the plot thickens. I can't wait to here what wonders are in store for us when they arive at the lake, and darn it to Hell, Xeno is justing turning out to be an intrepid and wonderful fellow. Such great character design, its just darling. Anyway, I'm sick of writing like an old woman talks, so keep up the smashing good work.
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Re: Toy Dolls 15
by Shade (Shade@Gothcult.com)
on Aug 21, 2003 - 06:24 AM
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Lol, thank you guys one and all. I am really enjoying writing Toy Dolls. And I'm honestly getting half my fun from getting to see what happens before everyone else! (Taunt taunt) I am very pleased that the characters are developing as well as I had hoped. It is sometimes really hard to tell from my point of view because I know so much more about the characters and events. I am always afraid of accidently assuming you all know something about Xeno or someone else. It sounds like I'm keeping that from happening though which is really gratifying! Thanks for all your praise and your critiques. They are both highly appreciated. -Shade
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Re: Toy Dolls 15
by Arthegarn on Aug 21, 2003 - 07:08 AM
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You know, I have lately been thinking that Xeno is toom young for some of the reflecions he makes, they seem bettter suited to an older man (ahem) But I can also understand he HAS to be that young. I mean... that guy is unexhaustable!
And I specially love the last part, too. We might get to see Devon get laid! Or will that make the character lose a part of his divinity? Paraphrasing Capt. Blyde it's difficult to be the leader of last's night mates of orgy...
Then again, maybe THAT is what makes him the leader.
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