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Fiction: Visions of Celestiny (Chapter One)
Posted by Starlight on Monday, February 03, 2003 - 02:05 PM PST

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Zak left his cruel Mistress under the cover of the dark jungle night. The marks on tanned skin of his bare back serve as a testament to her harshness towards her little one. The heat of the jungle now making itself well-apparent to him, as he feels the sweat on his back stinging the deep cuts Minerva's heavy whip has left on his skin. Trying to remain as stoic in his pain as possible, retaining that much of his training even now as he flees towards a new home. He had known for quite awhile now that he was no longer Minerva's favorite. She'd taken in a new little one a few months ago, and this new one obviously pleased his Mistress much more than he did. It had broken his heart when he realized he'd become nothing more than a practice piece for his Mistress' punishments. He had grown to feel more unloved and unwanted than he'd ever imagined possible. In essence, all his worst nightmares had now become his reality.

Through the thick jungle foliage, he continued to press onward towards his goal. He knew if he could make it to the village called Celestiny before sunrise, then he would be safe. He had heard stories of other runaways who had found save haven there, and that some of those seeking only temporary sanctuary had even made it their home.

It is rumored amongst the unhappy little ones of the Amazon tribes and villages of the jungle he lived in that Celestiny is ruled by one of the kindest of Amazon Queens. In the stories Zak has heard of Celestiny's Queen, she is said to be a tall goddess of a woman with glorious long blond hair, and sparkling Emerald green eyes. It is said she is harsh with those who do her wrong, but that she is a most generous and doting Mistress a little one could dream of having. It was these visions flowing through his mind that kept him moving forward despite the physical pain and exhaustion he was now feeling.

Zak is beginning to hear the soft bubbling sound of a natural spring flowing up from the ground just ahead. As he reaches the spring's edge, he sees the tell-tale signs of civilization close by as well. There are some gathering pots by the side of the spring, and up ahead about thirty yards is what appears to be a gatehouse of some sort.

Feeling suddenly overcome with fright as he moves a bit closer to the closed doors of the gatehouse and sees them swinging open. Holding his breath almost unconsciously as he sees a tall dark-haired Amazon woman emerge through the open doors of the gatehouse carrying a torch. He stands frozen in place taking almost silent breaths as he sees the dark-haired beauty lighting the wall torches on the walls on both sides of the gatehouse entrance.

Suddenly the woman turns and sees Zak standing there motionless wearing only a tattered loin cloth. He instinctively drops to his knees as he keeps his head steady and proud, but his eyes cast downward. As he feels the Amazon Mistress approach him, he further assumes his submissive position. He spreads his strong muscular legs about a shoulder width apart, and rests his heavily welted and sore bottom on his heels. His ample manhood is now available for examination by the approaching Mistress if she so desires to examine him.

Zak feels the presence of the powerful and beautiful Amazon goddess as she stands just in front of him. As she speaks, he hears the tones of kindness in her voice. She speaks, "Sweet one, who has done such damage to your body? You are covered in welts and bleeding strap marks."Zak feels her strong but tender touch on his cheek, he closes his eyes fully for a moment at the tenderness of the touch. Having not felt tenderness in the touch of a Mistress in a very long time, his body trembles slightly as he holds back the urge to weep.

The lovely and gentle Mistress speaks again to Zak, "Little one, please rise now, and let us go into the village. You will be bathed and your wounds dressed. Then you will be given a soft bed to sleep in for the night. In the morning, I will call for you, and you will come to me and we will speak of who has damaged you so badly. Then we will see if the Queen is available to meet with you."

Hearing her words of kindness, Zak timidly asks, "May I please be permitted to speak Mistress?"The dark-haired beauty answers, "Yes little one, please speak your mind."As Zak speaks, he manages to hold back another tremble of his body, "Mistress, have I reached the place called Celestiny?"He feels the Mistress lift his chin gently for him to look into her eyes as she speaks and smiles very softly, "Yes little one, you are home now."


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Re: Visions of Celestiny (Chapter One)
by firefly7 on Feb 03, 2003 - 09:06 PM
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Oo, I likies!


Re: Visions of Celestiny (Chapter One)
by Psychopixi on Feb 04, 2003 - 08:50 AM
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Oh, that was so yummy!!


Re: Visions of Celestiny (Chapter One)
by MystryssRavynDarque (A1MANDI04@AOL.COM)
on Feb 04, 2003 - 12:44 PM
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Happy Endings are so nice!


Re: Visions of Celestiny (Chapter One)
by Closetgothbabe on Feb 04, 2003 - 09:00 PM
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Yay for stories...I needed a good one to read. Thanks ::smiles::


Re: Visions of Celestiny (Chapter One)
by Dolorosa (SixOfSwords@IU.zzn.com)
on Feb 06, 2003 - 12:08 PM
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I'm not really sure...honestly, it was well described, and I liked where it was going...but I was kind of hoping for more, I hope this is just a prelude.


Re: Visions of Celestiny (Chapter One)
by PoeticChaos on Feb 06, 2003 - 04:40 PM
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I like this, but it kind of left me hanging off of a cliff. I also noticed that this says "Chapter One" in the title, does this mean there is more to come, and if so, do you have an idea of when?


Re: Visions of Celestiny (Chapter One)
by Malificent on Feb 06, 2003 - 06:15 PM
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I guess the biggest question here would be Why?
Character motivation and reasoning is a huge part of any literary piece, and I don't think the motivations in here are defined as well as they could be.


Re: Visions of Celestiny (Chapter One)
by BlueLinn (jishin101@yahoo.com)
on Feb 06, 2003 - 09:26 PM
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hmmm. I do hope there will be more. It leaves me on a bit of a ledge, however quite enjoyable. Kindness will always be rewarded by those who have known little.


Re: Visions of Celestiny (Chapter One)
by Starlight (elenmea@hotmail.com)
on Feb 08, 2003 - 10:00 AM
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I've been out on the road all this week with my hubby in his big rig, so didn't get to respond to the comments sooner. I'm going to respond to them now. Thanks for all the comments, it's was great to come home and see them.


Re: Visions of Celestiny (Chapter One)
by gothicmorman (litty_klj@hotmail.com)
on Feb 09, 2003 - 09:36 AM
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ooo, very good, ur kinda teasing us leaving it like that, when does the rest come...

the ruthless


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