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Disillusion: Michelle |
Posted by
Devin on Sunday, December 30, 2001 - 04:03 AM PST
Michelle has no friends because she knows what people are thinking.
She dances like she doesn't care, and it's almost true.
People say she's crazy, and she might be,
But I spent a few months with her once
Every minute
Every day
And I can tell you, she knows better than me what's going on.
I saw her tonight, it's been two years.
She's off drugs, gained some weight, looks good.
She seems shy without them.
Hiding behind her cigarette
Little fairys
In the smoke
I wonder if she still entertains herself for hours that way.
I can see why her eyes keep people away.
She'll look through you and answer your question as if you spoke.
They give her haldol to stop it, but it doesn't work.
I adore her, so I think she likes what she hears
Almost always
But sometimes
She's a jealous Aries, and I like to look at girls.
I learned to dance from strippers, but she taught me to do it right.
I remember her telling me "you can't care", and "see the words"
Nearly naked in her living room
Dancing with her demons till it was light.
And then sleeping
until three
Cuddled so close I could feel the lithium.
Did I tell you she masturbates with lollipops?
I thought it was odd when she told me,
but when I saw for myself, It seemed natural.
And she fucks like she's calling up the dead
Every spirit
Every ghost
Every time she cums it's like another person is there.
When people tell me they're goth, I always laugh
because I'm comparing them to her
She's not the stereotype, she's the prototype.
The punks fantasy land is real to her
Every vision
Every voice
And she doesn't even know what Gothic means.
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Michelle | Login/Create an account | 11 Comments |
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Re: Michelle
by Dolorosa on Dec 30, 2001 - 05:22 PM
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...beautiful, in a bittersweet and plaintive way...nice work...
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Re: Michelle
by whitedove (jaroddove@doveworksentertainment.com)
on Dec 31, 2001 - 07:27 AM
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I love this - I wish I knew someone like that. The best people are the hardest to find; but when found their beauty is overwhelming...
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Re: Michelle
by VladII (vladII@seznam.cz)
on Jan 15, 2002 - 11:23 PM
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very nicccce , you give me inssssspiration.
thankssssssssssssss
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Re: Michelle
by guitarfella on Dec 16, 2002 - 02:19 AM
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this is very special, thank you for sharing this with us! you captured their purity and beauty in these beutiful paragraphs; it makes me remember what it feels like to feel. so rare.
thank you
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Re: Michelle
by Merry_Widow on Dec 16, 2002 - 11:42 AM
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This made my throat tighten up. I can't remember the last time I read something that did that.
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Re: Michelle
by pandoras_choice (-)
on Feb 17, 2004 - 10:56 AM
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I know I am a few years too late; but, hey... what can I say? That was simply one of the most touching pieces I've ever read. Reading it feels like reading a part of the puzzle that is the world and glimpsing the magnificent whole; knowing that life is worth it.
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